Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Press Release Final

Press Release #2

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

Contact: Mr. Hans Ketchup

Burger Planet 703.775.2991

Burger Planet along with Jayne Peterson Introduce Pocket Wraps

And Wholesome Fruit for Guests Snaking on the Lighter Side

Gary, Indiana – Burger Planet and Jayne Peterson have come together helping costumers make healthy choices with high-quality flavorful Pocket Wraps and fresh fruit sides. Burger Planet will serve two new Pocket Wraps and Fresh Fruit sides, made available September 23.

Jayne Peterson’s select menu will feature a Green Chile Chicken Wrap and a Zesty Southwest Chicken Wrap. Side orders of apples, grapes, peaches, pineapple, and banana now come convenient and ready to go. Made with the same quality you’d expect, made to order and ready anytime you crave it.

Burger Planet’s Corny the Clown and Peterson are visiting franchises nationwide to celebrate your active life style and give back to the costumers whom have made all this possible, we celebrate you for living health. “I have spent my life teaching that message” Peterson said. The franchise tour will introduce the New Menu Pocket Wraps; and Fruit sides, and encourage customers to live healthy. Corny the Clown and Peterson in addition will give healthy tips on making nutritious decisions.

Burger Planet Pocket Wraps come to you Wrapped in a Flour tortilla with all white tender chicken marinated with Green Chile or Zesty Southwest Spice. In addition to the classic Burgers that made us famous. Mr. James E. Muellenbach III, wants to give you all the options you crave. “For more than seven decades, the company has succeeded because it puts the customer first. We listen to our customers. And our customers desire health options, of which we offer many.”

Burger Planet is serving more than 52 billion customers around the world, spanning across the nation and 17 countries across the globe.

Contact: Hans Ketchup

4 comments:

Kelsie said...

This looks really good. I like how you went into detail about the new menu options. Good work!

Taylor and Cortney said...

Good Work Stevo. Your press release shows good research and understanding of Burger Planet. Great detail and explanations!

Preston said...

Include company contact info at the top as well as media contact person info at the bottom. End Press Release with (END) or ###. Use AP style on states, especially in datelines. Include date at the beginning of release. Speak in third person "they, them" not first person "we, our, us, you". Describe Corny as a mascot. No caps on apples, grapes, etc. Do not put Mr. and CEO in the same description of the same person. Overall too much focus on individual food items, okay to speak generally of some of these.

Anonymous said...

very organized, clear and a little trouble with AP style but overall really good.