Practice News Story 1
Fatal Van Accident Kills Students of Utah State University. A Dodge Van traveling down Interstate 84 west was seen by one witness Jennie Smith, she said “I witnessed a giant dust cloud, which spun out of control violently throwing all 10 students.” That dust cloud came from the 15 passenger van, in route to a Farm Impliment Store. Aggie students were on a field trip, being driven by Profesor Even Parker. According to police Lt. Michaud, he said “this is the worst accident I’ve seen in 15 years”. On the cine police and medical unites quickly attended to all students as they were quickly sent off. Four critically injured students were sent by Flight for Live and one student by ambulance were taken to near by hospitals. Kyle Holden a driver of a following car said, “As I passed the Van the drives rear tire blew out of control throwing the van into a spin which just rolled over and over.”
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2 comments:
Good job. Told all the details. Seems a little short, but then again we didn't have much time.
Steve,
I liked your story, you used alot of quotes which made it sound official. I liked it.
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